Don't Skip
The prompt I used was " Do you wish you could return to a moment in your past?" Right now, the essay is at exactly 644 words. If you could find any unnecessary bits that don't need to be here, I'd like to know what those are as there are more details I want to add. There are many moments throughout my life that I wish I could return to, as I have several regrets that happened only because of a silly decision I made. The best example of this within the past year is what transpired last May on the day of the awards ceremony. In both subbie and freshman year, my friends and I hadn't won any significant awards. A few of us were asked to stand up for the various foreign language national exams, but names are not announced for those awards. (Plus, I knew my score from the national German exam beforehand, and it was certainly too low to win anything). Because of this, and the fact that I wasn't a senior, the only possible way I could win an award is from a ...